Phew...i am finally back! Probably must of you just didn't read my last journal, yes i was gone for a while because of a fight and blah blah blah but now i am back in black fellas! So i will start this with a little test for an O.C of mine~ you can steal if ya want nyehehehehe.
This is a quiz to help determine if your OC is a Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu for anyone who is curious
There are 4 Categories
4. Great OC
Now what you REALLY don't want is number one…however it has to be pretty bad to be number one
And just because your character got a few Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu qualities does NOT mean that it's a bad OC, so don't complain please
So get a note to tally your score for your Original Character and…enjoy!
1. What is your OC's name? (Real name, not nickname)
a. Something cute like Sparkle or Midnight <3
b. Something easy like Beth or Bob
c. Named after me — Momo. Yes, is a cute and easy name as well but is because of my last name.
d. A name that ties into its character
2. What is your OC?
b. Something with animal ears (not cat ears though)
c. Modeled after me — a human :duh:
d. Whatever ties into the storyline (can merge with c)
3. What is your OC's hair like? (Hetalia curls are ok for Hetalia characters)
a. Multicolor unnatural colors with cute pigtails and bows (don't forget the Hetalia curls )
b. Unnatural colors, or cutesy natural colors with pigtails and bows
c. Natural colors with a few colorful highlights or Italy curls
d. Natural colors —yes, Momo has black hair
4. Is your OC in a relationship?
a. YES! Every guy/girl wants him/her because he/she is so perfect and smexy ^^
b. My OC has dated a few people but ends up with my anime crush
c. My OC ends up with my anime crush because I sincerely think that they are a good match
d. No relationship, or they date a random character that they are compatible with — NO RELATIONSHIP she is too young.
5. If your OC is in a relationship, describe their process
a. Love at first sight! And then they started making out and stuff
b. Love at first sight! However it took a week or two for them to actually start dating
c. They both had feelings for each other from the beginning, though they developed a relationship over time like real life people
d. They started out friends, or heck, even enemies! (One could have had a crush on the other) Then a bunch of complex stuff happened, I don't even really understand it to be perfectly honest…
6. How does your OC refer to his/her significant other? (For an example, I will use ENGLAND >:3)
c. England — BUT Mr. England to date my character has to be: 1-a pedophile of some sort 2-really patient (both thing he isn't, besides, Momo would call him MISTER.)
d. My handsome gentleman, Aurthur
Eeeeh...my O.C was created before a Hetalia-Pasta-Fever?...cuz' i don't remember saying so.
7. How many people have a crush on your OC?
b. 5-10 characters
c. 3-4 characters
d. 1-2 characters— yeah...and by crush i mean they want to CRUSH her skull.
8. Describe your OC's body (if not chibi)
a. Body of a god/goddess, muscles/curves in all the right places
b. Skinny/lanky and beautiful/handsome
c. Normal — she is a kid, she doesn't really care X'D
d. Insecure with his/her body, or flawed/undesired type (no matter what type)
9. If your OC is a chibi, describe their looks
b. SUPER KAWAII (enough said…)
c. Huge eyes and blushing cheeks
d. Chubby and huggable
10. Describe your OC's relations with the same gender (or the opposite gender if he/she is gay or lesbian)
a. Oh, they are all jealous of my OC
b. My OC hates them
c. Some are friends, some are enemies because of their canon character
d. Some friends, some enemies, some of them are admired by my OC — eeyup.
11. Describe your character's childhood
a. Spoiled and loved
b. Difficult childhood
c. Decent childhood
d. All of the above (turbulent childhood) — I think that is what people would call a normal childhood, filled of obstacles ups and downs just like a rollercoaster, afterall, that is what life is about isn't it?
12. How much time have you spent researching?
a. Research? It's called an Original Character for a reason! — i like to change her background, like, she is just a character she can be really rude, or really sweet but she is not perfect.
b. Very little, and if any at all, stolen from other OCs
c. Enough to get a good background
d. What time HAVEN'T I spent researching?? O.o
13. If your OC is mythical, it is a:
c. Elves, dwarves, etc (simple)
d. Creatures from mythology or different species of elves, dwarves, etc
14. What are your character's weaknesses?
a. Weaknesses…? o.e
b. Cute men/women
c. Sensitivity, anger issues, insecurity, bad memories, etc
d. (Same as c) — of course everybody has their flaws.
15. What is your character's secret power? (Choose all that apply)
a. Getting men/women to love him/her!
b. Magic!! (unless its a mage, mages are cool)
d. Treading lightly but carrying a big stick(expression), smart, can strategize
well, etc — when she wants too, but ahe is still little, oh! She is a good runner.
16. When you write stories with your OC in it, how much is it involved?
a. She/he steals the show!! Everything revolves around him/her
b. There are a few characters, but he/she is a part of the main plot line
c. He/she is always just another character
d. It varies depending on the story — i don't get her into other "worlds" (like other shows like Hetalia or MLPFiM) unless they are my friends's worlds (which means, i had permission to include her)
17. When you draw your OC, you…(This depends on your artistic ability though)
a. Who cares as long as it captures his/her cuteness??
b. I only put effort into the parts of him/her that are beautiful
c. Anime mostly
d. Anime or realistic, the point is, my OC doesn't look perfect (or drawing style varies)— i like drawing her ALOT ^^ but i can't upload so much pictures becuse i alck a formal camera for myself.
18. What really puts the "Original" in your Original Character?
a. He/she is so much smexier than everyone else!
b. Umm…I came up with it?
c. The fact that they are their own character with unique qualities different from the others —
d. C + trademark feature
19. What feature do you always add to your OC?
a. Sparkles and bows ^^
b. Winking and blushing
c. A smile
d. Their trademark feature, everything else varies — meh i guess so.
20. What is the word that best describes your OC's appearance?
c. Unattractive or average — like i said...she is a kiddo .3.
d. B and C (yes, he/she can be both)
21. Bonus! If you answered B or D to question 20, how would you describe the beauty? (Pick each that apply)
a. They are just beautiful! Nuff said :I
b. Classical Greek Statuary (Symmetrical, any situation handled with grace and poise)
c. Hellenistic Greek Statuary (Still symmetrical and beautiful, however, realistic poise)
d. My OC has a heart of gold
Now, the quiz is over, if you got:
All A's - You are either joking or entering your OC in a Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu contest
All D's - You have an Anti-Sue/Stu, there is such a thing as trying to hard
Mostly A's – You have a Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu………….No comment…:I
Mostly B's – Your OC is unoriginal. Not unoriginal that you didn't put enough thought into the character, but it's just mainstream. If this bothers you, just fix up a few errors and make your character realistic. At least it's not a Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu
Mostly C's – Your character is realistic. This is not bad, just be warned that some people will find fault and call your character a Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu, but don't let it bug you too much
Mostly D's – If your character is called a Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu, never listen, you have an amazing OC
Weeeell, it looks like Momo is a good chara :I
I am going to continue! Hoopla! For myself of course...I REALLY WANT to finish this story but i don't want to give it a lame end! U___U iwill upload other stories in my fanfiction account but they will be in spanish...sorry. oh! One thing before you go...You tried reading the title?